Thread: We need all ALIPACer Opinions on this

How does it look?

See any errors?

Approve of the questions?

Approve of the Survey?

Anything missing?

We release this to candidates tomorrow, your thoughts?

http://www.alipac.us/ftopicp-1085334.html#1085334

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LIKE IT. Please keep us informed as to how many candidates return the form.

looks good william. keep us informed.

Originally Posted by ReggieMay

LIKE IT. Please keep us informed as to how many candidates return the form.

im betting results will be posted on that forum based on what each person answers

Quote:
"I support Comprehensive Immigration, ENFORCEMENT which will reverse illegal immigration in America? (1-10)"

remove comma between "Immigration" and "ENFORCEMENT" (and add after ENFORCEMENT?).

I would like to see some of the following questions ....

1) what will you do to stop the illegal alien voting fraud

2) will you take a tough stance, including sanctions against mexico until they clean up their act

how about this

questions about ice workplace raids

comdeming mexico for getting involved in our legislation and courts.

military on the border

The questions are good ones. I have two comments/suggestions:

1. When the particpant is responding with a 1-10, these prompts should be worded as statements. For example:

I support Arizona's new immigration law SB 1070. (1-10)

2. I would like an additional response statement like the following:

I believe that my FIRST priority is to represent the will of the American people on the issue of illegal immigration rather than the those of special interest groups or political parties.

When its ready I'll make sure it gets to Sharon Angle

Leave the comma out of that question above. It is a complex sentence joined with the subordinating conjunction "which". Only coordinating conjunctions like "and" and others get a comma beore it. It may seem like a little problem, but a comma in the wrong place sticks out like a sore thumb to those who are grammar buffs.

If ever in doubt, leave the comma out. Better to appear to have forgotten it than to have it in wrong place.