Thread: NEW Version of the Video, please proof and review

Here is the newest version of the video after many of your suggested changes were incorporated.

Please give this a going over with a fine tooth comb. Please post any final needed corrections here in this thread to help us get this ready for release.

Sellout Senators up for Re-election in 2008 video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7Ky3eq8r9I

It looked alright to me...

First scrolling sentence "S1348 tand who" Remove the "t".

Second scrolling sentence "pro- criminal". Remove the space after "-".

I am with Dixie on the T

Thanks, anyone else spot anything else that needs correction or change? Im ready to get this finalized and out the door for distribution.

W

After Biden--"presidential" is misspelled, in you are "not presidential material".

I personally would not use Tim Johnson because I am pretty sure he is still recovering from brain surgery after that stroke in December.

Looks and sounds great other than that T. I love this video, so will all those other POED Americans!

Originally Posted by April

Looks and sounds great other than that T. I love this video, so will all those other POED Americans!

AWESOME video and funny too

Fantastic video!

After the changes are made I will be sending the link to everyone.

I like the changes to the text/humor.

A few more typos that haven't been mentioned yet in this thread:

1) In the Saxby Chambliss part, add "ing" to "bring" in this sentence:
"We're not bring Saxby back" = "We're not bringing Saxby back."

2) At the end where the Rasmussen poll is mentioned, add an "n" to "amesty" [sic] in this sentence:
"Just 26% ... passage of amnesty bill S. 1348."

3) At the start of the next sentence, use a double quotation mark for the opening quote instead of a single quote:
'Calls and email . . ." (starts with single quotation mark)
"Calls and email . . . " (needs a double quotation mark at the start)

Near the start of the video, can you leave up www.alipac.us a bit longer?

Duh