Thread: ALIPAC Accomplishments Draft

A few of ALIPAC’s Accomplishments

Online Activism: ALIPAC has created the largest online archive of information about America’s illegal immigration crisis. Our archive is helping citizens, lawmakers, journalists, and campaigns to fight illegal immigration every day. With over 22 million pages viewed, ALIPAC is playing a crucial role in the Critical Mass forming on the illegal immigration issue. Our website and archive are in the top three rankings for visitors out of the entire immigration enforcement movement. We have used our success to elevate hundreds of allied organizations on the web. We are currently one of the top activist platforms in existence on this issue.

National Media: We have established and maintained a national media profile to help organize citizen activists while warning millions of Americans about illegal immigration. ALIPAC has been covered on FOX News, CNN, National Public Radio, Business Week Magazine, and hundreds of major newspapers and talk radio shows. We are carrying your message to the public via extensive national media.

Coalition Builders: ALIPAC works to increase communication and cooperation in the immigration enforcement movement. We have supported hundreds of events and rallies, organized meetings, supported summits, and we currently are national leaders with our National Employer Flier Campaign, which is supported by over 55 allied groups and organizations. We helped establish and promote www.wehirealiens.com to give the public another tool to report employers and have worked closely with NumbersUSA, The Minutemen, Latino Americans for Immigration Reform, and many others.

Breaking News: ALIPAC plays a key role in breaking many stories on the national level including the pictures of the offensive billboards in LA proclaiming that the city is part of Mexico and the MS-13 gang threat to American activists. Our activism helped bring these billboards down in 8 days. We continue to bring the nation stories they would have no knowledge of without our help. We have built an extensive network comprised of talk radio shows, local cable shows, organizations, blogs, and citizen activists that work together to circulate news which is often ignored by the Main Stream Media.

Public Assistance: ALIPAC has assisted tens of thousands of people via phone calls, e-mails, and online resources to report employers and take local action. We have brought thousands of new people into the immigration enforcement movement through our extensive assistance efforts.

Legislation: ALIPAC played a key role in the defeat of In-State Tuition for illegal aliens in NC, MA, and FL. We have helped pass state laws in several states and have worked hard to prevent any legislation containing amnesty for illegal aliens from passing in the US Congress. Our citizen activists and online archive have helped fuel the passage of local laws and ordinances fighting illegal immigration.

Candidates: We have endorsed and contributed to over 16 federal candidates that stand with the public on illegal immigration. Our national voter guide and coast to coast efforts for 2006 are in progress and we need your financial and volunteer support to make history in 2006!

In the first line: ALIPAC has created the largest online archive of information

How about: ALIPAC is the largest online archive

or: ALIPAC has the largest online archive


Just a thought. Still reading. I don't know others may disagree with that. I could be wrong.

Our activism helped bring these billboards down in 8 days and bring the nation stories they would have no knowledge of without our help.

How about:

Our activism brought these billboards down in 8 days. ALIPAC is bringing the nation extremely important information as well as news stories which otherwise would go unreported.

Just a thought.

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We have carried your message to the public via extensive national media.

how about: WE ARE CARRYING YOUR MESSAGE (present tense)

It all looks good. I only see sometimes where using the "present tense" might be more powerful, as someone else suggested.

Originally Posted by LegalUSCitizen

We have carried your message to the public via extensive national media.

how about: WE ARE CARRYING YOUR MESSAGE (present tense)

It all looks good. I only see sometimes where using the "present tense" might be more powerful, as someone else suggested.

Good suggestions. I will move that to active voice.

W

ALIPAC...In your opinion, who is the one elected official who is doing the most in fighting amnesty, and helping to secure our borders..I have limited funds, so I have to limit my political tithing, and am wondering which candidate do you feel is (or will) make the most use out of his time in office (combating ill. immigration) (if not just one, give me the short list)

Originally Posted by Patrick-Henry

ALIPAC...In your opinion, who is the one elected official who is doing the most in fighting amnesty, and helping to secure our borders..I have limited funds, so I have to limit my political tithing, and am wondering which candidate do you feel is (or will) make the most use out of his time in office (combating ill. immigration) (if not just one, give me the short list)

PH,

We will have a whole spread of candidates and elected officials across the country that you will need to choose from. That info is extensive and on the way. Save up, contribute to ALIPAC, and we will do all we can to get that operation running for you and the nation soon.

W