Thread: Rivoli Revue needs some backup fighting trolls

OK All done!!!

"...if it's not too much to ask, could you please speak Eng-leesh" ?!?!

Sorry, the overall message is great, the execution is embarrassing. It's ironic that the song pleads for folks to speak English, and in order to rhyme it completely bastardizes the word "English". I mean, honestly...attempting to rhyme the word "English" with the word "liberties" is ridiculous, especially when "please" is available and used in the same sentence. Ironic, no? Though I am a musician and a songwriter, it doesn't take much to write the line so it works:

i.e "...share this land of liberties, if it's not too much to ask, could you speak in English, please..."

I digress...the message is great, but the hook line is terribly crafted and worthy of harsh critique, especially given the ironic nature of asking people to "speak Eng-leesh" No stars from me, though I see any idiots bashing it THERE for content and I'll hand them their asses...

Peace.