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  1. 05-04-2009, 04:25 PM #1
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    WILLIAM: Fast proofing help needed

    please let me know if you see any erros in this, im launching it in a few minutes.

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  2. 05-04-2009, 05:26 PM #2
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    Further of proof
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    Janet Napolitano does not seem to be able to open her mouth, without saying something offensive and asinine.

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    Some of the latest propaganda "leaked" from her department says you might be a domestic terrorist threat, if you are one of the over 77% of Americans opposed to licenses or in-state tuition for illegal aliens.

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  5. 05-04-2009, 05:31 PM #5
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    Great so far W but please say something about Schumer's phoney Immigration Reform Committee that doesn't represent Americans' wish to control illegal immigration.
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  6. 05-05-2009, 10:55 AM #6
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    The old beat the dead horse and play the worn out race card routine. Their false cries that a racist wolf is approaching the flock of sheeple mantra fills the media echo chambers.
    Awkward wording for these two sentences. Using quotation marks to accentuate the descriptive phrases may make it clearer.
    "We have decided man doesn't need a backbone any more; to have one is old-fashioned. Someday we're going to slip it back on." - William Faulkner
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