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  1. 09-07-2006, 01:39 PM #1
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    Need a quick proof please.

    Can someone scan the bolded not on the homepage at this link and tell me if you see any typos or errors before I send it out to our national lists?

    http://www.alipac.us/modules.php?name=N ... e&sid=1485

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  2. 09-07-2006, 01:43 PM #2
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    W, I ran it through and it looks good. The only thing Word doesn't like is the La Raza word. I can't say that I blame MS Word for that!
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    You left out "Committee" both times after "March 10". You should move "(The Race)" from the second paragraph to after La Raza in the first paragraph.
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    Looks good to me William.
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    Looks good to me!!!
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    I ran it, Didn't come up with anything
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    Looks good to me I did not catch anything but I am not an English Major.
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    W: No errors noted. Very clean indeed.

    Only suggestion (just to consider)...

    I also noted the reference to La Raza also - there's nothing wrong with it, but I might suggest that if you include the parenthetical translation (The Race) it might be a bit clearer to a reader that know absolutely no Spanish to do something like (trans. "The Race") or ("The Race" in Spanish), etc.

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    W: Have you heard from the folks at OFIR (OR for Imm. Reform)? I'm surprised their not also supporting yet...
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    Just FYI, number of signatures on boycott list is now 5000+
    Phrede,

    When I looked at the website about an hour ago, it was just barely over 4,000 signatures. Its pretty neat to see it has risen this much.
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    Sip:

    Yeah, I know! In the latest 'batch' of signatures, there's been a huge block from Colorado....wonder what happened there? (seems to have helped a lot).
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